Great elevator pitch Amanda! This idea is great. Every year on the news I hear about a child who dies in the car from being left there. Most of the time, the parents simply forget that the child was in the back of the car. This device connected to your smart phone will save lives and that is what makes your product so great. Parents all over the U.S. will buy this product just in case they ever face this problem. Your consumers will buy this even though they know they would not leave their child in the car because it helps secure in their minds that they will never make this mistake.
I didn't get much feedback on my original elevator pitch except for one comment saying the actual product was a great idea. I decided to show my pitch to a few of my close friends and family and they commented that I should be more animated. So for this take, I used the same exact script since I liked the content along with the facts, except I tried to speak more naturally and with more enthusiasm. (Keyword: tried lol) I get very shy when I have to speak in front of a camera so hopefully, this works. Let me know your honest feedback!
For this Elevator pitch, I stuck to the same script. I got only positive feedback on my last video so I tried to convey the same emotion and tone. Although I still don't think I have memorized the script.
Great elevator pitch Amanda! This idea is great. Every year on the news I hear about a child who dies in the car from being left there. Most of the time, the parents simply forget that the child was in the back of the car. This device connected to your smart phone will save lives and that is what makes your product so great. Parents all over the U.S. will buy this product just in case they ever face this problem. Your consumers will buy this even though they know they would not leave their child in the car because it helps secure in their minds that they will never make this mistake.
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