Elevator Pitch No. 3 - 22A
For this Elevator pitch, I stuck to the same script. I got only positive feedback on my last video so I tried to convey the same emotion and tone. Although I still don't think I have memorized the script.
Elevator Pitch No. 2 - 17A
I didn't get much feedback on my original elevator pitch except for one comment saying the actual product was a great idea. I decided to show my pitch to a few of my close friends and family and they commented that I should be more animated. So for this take, I used the same exact script since I liked the content along with the facts, except I tried to speak more naturally and with more enthusiasm. (Keyword: tried lol) I get very shy when I have to speak in front of a camera so hopefully, this works. Let me know your honest feedback!
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch. You were interactive, clear and had great delivery. Those were all things that I tried to get better at for my pitch. It was obvious that you've had practice and I tried to improve. I found these pitches difficult at first but after each attempt, it got easier, it seemed to be the same way for you.
I thought you did a very good job with your elevator pitch. You did an outstanding job conveying the same emotion and tone as you did in your last elevator pitch. Even if you don't feel like you have the script entirely memorized, the pitch flowed smoothly in my opinion and appeared natural as opposed to someone just staring at me and reading of lines. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Amanda, I thought you had na great elevator pitch. It was very informative and very well structured throughout the interview. I noticed that you rehearsed the video; however, I am not sure if you are reading or not. It looks like you had a lot of information that you had to memorize, but reading was easier. I have as an idea for the next time that some flash cards in front would be better so you do not have to look to the side in case you forget a lot. Great Job!
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